Since releasing the original version, I have since watched a few other edits of this episode and I feel further improvements can be made, some inspired by the other cuts I saw, but I gave the edits my own twist
Changes to version two
-Capaldi and Bradley’s banter greatly reduced, time freezes directly after Twelve says First’s face is all over the place due to holding back regeneration
-Testimony ship now abducts the TARDIS before the ‘male nurses’ dialogue can kick in, this allows us to skip other unnecessary conversations about The Doctor’s guitar and One dismaying that Polly isn’t around to do the cleaning up
-One’s reaction to the sonic sunglasses remains cut.
-Twelve’s “cut out all the jokes” line is cut
-Bill’s reaction to One’s TARDIS is cut
-One’s remarks regarding Bill giving the TARDIS a spring cleaning is cut, helping bridge the transition between One’s missing lines and Twelve interrupting him is the line “I kind of miss it” in regards to Bill missing her travels with The Doctor.
-One’s reactions to having the sonic sunglasses placed on his eyes cut, as is the line “what’s browser history”
-The infamous “made of glass/fairer sex experience” exchange cut.
-Bill and Twelve’s argument minimised as Bill finds The Doctor’s doubts about her amusing. One’s threat of a spanked bottom cut
-Capaldi’s final speech greatly reduced. Soundtrack removed from scene to allow better transitions
-Regeneration occurs, but we cut away to a “TO BE CONTINUED” before we see anything from Thirteen.
-Jodie Whitaker’s credit cut in ending