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Doctor Who-Rosa [Fanedit]

RosaThe promised rebuilds of series 11 episodes continues with “ROSA”, now 30% less preachy than the original.

A few ideas I tried out in the original edit have been reinserted into the latest copy, such as James Blake being sent away to Mill Creek. Another idea I had was to try and remove Krasco entirely and make things a pure historical, but I ran into a couple of narrative and continuity issues with that.

So the simplest solution was to just minimise everything, remove as much of the social commentary as possible, while retaining all of the important story beats

CHANGE LIST

-Rosa being denied passage on the bus serves as the pre-title sequence

-Yaz talking to Ryan about the various advances in history that is to come, scene now ends with Ryan reflecting on his nan’s teachings

-The conversation on the afternoon bus trip is omitted

-Ryan Sinclare meeting Rosa’s husband and Martin Luther King. The aftermath is the only thing retained.

-The song played when Rosa is arrested has been removed, and the reprise for the end credits is also gone, replaced by the Doctor Who theme.

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Doctor Who-The Woman Who Fell To Earth [Fanedit]

Woman Who Fell To Earth

SCENE 13, TAKE TWO

I first attempted this as a fanedit back in October 2018 with a TV rip, now that I have the official DVDs, the real fun can begin. Revisiting edits means you get the chance to sort out your editing choices and perhaps consider reinstating things you cut from the previous version.

-I’ve worked out how to omit all scenes with Grace fastening herself to the equipment while retaining Tim Shaw activating the DNA bombs, all that was required is a short quick cut omitting the reaction shots from the cast.

-I’ve decided to include Ryan’s youtube blog from the beginning of the episode, only now it’s been repurposed, it occurs after Tim Shaw teleports away, and Ryan’s bike ride is now observed by The Doctor.

-Episode does not end on the original cliffhanger (saving their predicament there for the pre-sting sequence of Ghost Monument), instead it ends just as The Doctor asks if Yazmin and Ryan can help her with locating the TARDIS.

Rebuilds of Ghost Monument and Rosa, and possibly one other, coming soon.

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